A drabble and one.

[persian-slipper.livejournal.com]

It's inevitable. You want to write smut and the Muse gives you angst. Silly Fraser.



Killing Innocence
by Persian Slipper

I thought she had changed. My naïveté, my ignorance of the difference between love and lust, my willful blindness to her true nature all led me astray. And by the time I had realized my mistake, it was too late. I would have followed her anywhere.

I reflect on this as I lie in the hospital, recovering from my wound. Ray’s bullet saved me, but it killed some of my naïve belief in my own judgment. Ray should not have been dragged into this; I should have seen what she really was. How could I have ever been so damn naïve?

Comments

[akite.livejournal.com]

Wah! But we love you naive, Fraser. That was a wonderful drabble and one.

Angst

[themoo37.livejournal.com]

The Muse did you a favour. Angst is good.

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

you know, most people have either gone for comedy or sex, but this just skewers the heart of his angst after VS. Very nice!

[ozsaur.livejournal.com]

A nice take on Fraser's genuine naivete right from canon. Poor Fraser.

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

I think this is an absolutely on-the-money peek into what's going through poor Benny's head during those days in the hospital. Wow. Bravo! Well done. I'd like to see something similar from Ray's POV, the guilt that he is carrying.