I am my own minion

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Okay, yeah, I'm late--but as I kept saying to the betas, "Hey, I got some pull with the admin, ok?" For the 7 Deadly Sins Challenge, 3,527 words of Stella/Fraser (yeah, okay, so I'm a little over the word count, and it's a weird pairing, I know, but--what, am I gonna smack down myself? I don't think so! This is what powah means!!)

Covet by Speranza; thanks to Terri and Resonant for beta!!

Comments

[pearl-o.livejournal.com]

I love this. I *love* this. Dude.

[fantasmabob.livejournal.com]

oh jesus.

"Ray used to...right here,"

*whimper*

[lynnmonster.livejournal.com]

Go, Stella (you delicious, devious, sad little minx) -- and go, Fraser, for knowing what it's all about!

Nnnggghgngn and ow.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

So twisted and so exactly right. Man, Ray better get a clue soon, and Stella needs Vecchio right now.

[wildmachinery.livejournal.com]

Oh my god. I never would have thought of this pairing, and yet, so perfect.

I have much love for this one.

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Gaaah!

So wrong, but it works, the way you wrote it.

Wow.

[brynwulf]

As usual, you can make the right wrong, the reluctant eager....

And hey! I have that icon too, but I was waiting to use it till I could come up with a clever text. *giggle*

[laurashapiro.livejournal.com]

I had no idea you were this mean!

::stares in appreciative awe::

[akite.livejournal.com]

Wow, that was evil and twisted, but you know, in that good way. I'll be thinking about this for a while.

Covet

[maj-cliffhanger.livejournal.com]

Whoa...
That was incredible. The depth of the characters... It worked. I would have never thought it possible, but it more than worked. I didn't even hear my blush meter explode in the background. ;-)
Simply incredible... Take a bow girl.
__
Janice

[sprat.livejournal.com]

Whew. That's gotta be the queerest, kinkiest het sex scene I've read in a long time. And *hot*! My word.

::so not even *trying* to fight the powah::

:)

hachi fuckin' *machi*, baby

[kormantic.livejournal.com]

Holy sweet goddamn, I loved this. Oh, Stella. You are my favorite ex-wife.

[engenda.livejournal.com]

God, this will have me thinking for a while. Wow, Stella and Fraser. So fascinating. Also fascinating is that the whole thing is about Ray.

Wow. Not very coherent.

[norah.livejournal.com]

That was some lovely het, woman! I love me a toppy!Stella, and toppy-yet-fragile is...oh! so good. And Fraser, so true to his heart, with a slight detour for his prick...perfect.

[estrella30.livejournal.com]

Dude - killing me freaking dead over here lately, ok?

Most importantly, she got his attitude: she went into that marriage a shy debutante from the Gold Coast and came out of it prepared to go toe-to-toe with anybody. She had Ray to thank for that, which was another reason she still wore his name.

LOVE this. I love thinking that even now Stella realizes, and appreciates what Ray had given her. Wonderful job.

For me, the hottest thing ever was the thought of Stella watching Ray and the jock making out, and then Ray taking Stella back to the car and fucking her in the backseat. This line in particular, really struck me as something a 17 year old Stella would say:

Finally, she hears herself saying, "But he's a jock," like that's the important point; how could Ray Kowalski even be seen with a jock? Not, she supposed, that Ray ever intended to be seen.

Wow. Just, the whole damn thing was incredible. Terrific job!