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580 words of mild F/K. Wow, this is really scary, I've gone all weak at the elbows. (I mean posting this is scary, the ficlet isn't at all. I hope.)

Apologies if I do this wrong, I've only had lj for 3 days. Checked for egregious errors by the kind and lovely Regina.


Sometimes Fraser wished that someone had thought to dissuade Turnbull from ever becoming a member of the RCMP, or at the very least had stationed him a very long way from Chicago and himself. He was usually slightly ashamed of such thoughts since Turnbull undoubtedly tried very hard and always had the best intentions. But as his latest good intention had led directly to Fraser’s current ridiculous and embarrassing situation, the kindest thought he could spare for the hapless constable was a fervent prayer for him to somehow go back in time and be devoured by bears as a child, thus preventing today’s events from ever occurring.

On the bright side, Fraser had managed to insist that the dignity of the RCMP required more privacy than had been initially suggested. The tent at least spared him the embarrassment of an audience, though he had to admit that this had proved to be a decidedly mixed blessing. Altogether it had been a most trying morning and Fraser was more than ready for a break. He dropped down into the chair Turnbull had provided, grateful for some time alone to regain his composure.

Fraser was unprepared for Ray to suddenly arrive in front of him, wearing the determined look that usually only surfaced when he was hot on the trail of hardened criminals. “Unprepared” gave way to “completely astonished”, however, when Ray moved forward and simply slid down into his lap, thighs straddling his and warm weight holding him in place.

Such unanticipated behaviour really required some kind of explanation, but he was too interested in the look in Ray’s eyes to think of asking for one. He’d known his partner cared for him, of course, but how had he never noticed how intense it was? How had he never seen this? He couldn’t even spare a thought to the likely expression on his own face, he was so absorbed by what he could now see, a desire he had never dared to hope for suddenly within reach.

He realised his hands had somehow moved to rest on Ray’s waist and curve round one lean thigh just as he felt a strong hand cup the back of his neck, bracelet cool against his skin and fingers stroking gently at the nape. His breath caught, seeming loud in the concentrated silence of the tent and he watched rapt as Ray dropped his gaze to his mouth. He licked suddenly dry lips and saw Ray tense and flush before he locked eyes with Fraser again, looking hesitant for the first time since his arrival.

“Yeah?”

The unexpectedness of the question almost made Fraser jump in surprise. Apparently his emotions weren’t spread as blatantly across his face for Ray to see as he had thought they must be. The husky sound of that one short word made him shiver and he had to swallow hard before answering.

“Yes.”

His own voice was nearly as rough as Ray’s and he saw Ray shiver in turn as delight and heat replaced hesitation. Then finally, finally Ray was leaning in to kiss him, slight sweet-coffee-salt taste and soft warm lips against his as Fraser’s arms wrapped around his back and pulled them tightly together.

Fraser must really remember to compliment Turnbull later on his initiative. He hadn’t thought so when the Inspector had ordered his cooperation and presence this morning, but the “Kiss a Mountie for Charity” tent at the fair truly had been a most marvellous idea.

Date: 2005-03-24 12:55 am (UTC)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (Kissyface by Brooklinegirl)
From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
Hee! I liked it. No need to be scared here. We be friendly folk. :g: Besides, I get to use my Kissyface icon.

Date: 2005-03-24 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aerye.livejournal.com
Absolutely delightful!

Date: 2005-03-24 01:23 am (UTC)
reginagiraffe: Stick figure of me with long wavy hair and giraffe on shirt. (Default)
From: [personal profile] reginagiraffe
I like the changes!

Very nice!

Date: 2005-03-24 01:26 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] china_shop
Ooh, this is great! :)

Date: 2005-03-24 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bamani71.livejournal.com
That was adorable!

Date: 2005-03-24 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com
dude - this is *wonderful*!!

I loved every single word of it - you need to write more! This is fantastic!!

Date: 2005-03-24 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com
Turnbull needs a medal. :g: Or perhaps smuggling into the latest royal wedding.

Date: 2005-03-24 11:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com
Turnbull wouldn't want to be at the Wedding; the Queen isn't going!

Date: 2005-03-24 02:47 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (boykissage by tarar)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Fabulous! Great twist at the end and an oh-so-perfect kiss.

Date: 2005-03-24 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
dude. Fan-fucking-tastic. Ray would do that - he doesn't generally do things halfway - and the image of him sliding onto Fraser's lap is one that's going to stick with me. I love the "Yeah? Yeah." exchange deeply. VERY nicely done.

Date: 2005-03-24 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com
*grins* Yay! Thank you for the kind words re: my rampant insanity. Welcome to the fandom!

Date: 2005-03-24 03:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com
Welcome! And thanks for bringing us such a lovely gift!
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Date: 2005-03-24 11:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com
Okay, now I'm going to have the image of Ray sliding onto Fraser's lap in my head for the rest of ... well, possibly the rest of forever. You made Ray so damn sexy just with that one line ... didn't even need to describe him. *loves this*

Date: 2005-03-24 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katallison.livejournal.com
This was just lovely and delightful -- thanks so much for posting it!

Date: 2005-03-24 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] indywind
Thank you kindly, this was great.

I wonder if Turnbull also toook a turn receiving kisses for charity?

Date: 2005-03-24 03:44 pm (UTC)
ext_20943: (fool (by Stormy))
From: [identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com
weehee... "kiss a mountie for charity", GREAT! Love the whole idea! And Ray is just... God, this guy ::shakes head::

His own voice was nearly as rough as Ray’s and he saw Ray shiver in turn as delight and heat replaced hesitation. Then finally, finally Ray was leaning in to kiss him, slight sweet-coffee-salt taste and soft warm lips against his as Fraser’s arms wrapped around his back and pulled them tightly together.

::sigh::


btw: Love you icon! Is it Scotland's Eileen Donan Castle?

Date: 2005-03-24 05:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com
I'm impressed you recognise it just from that little pic - I'm not sure I would have if I didn't already know!

I was there and it's a beautiful place!


Date: 2005-03-24 05:55 pm (UTC)
ext_20943: (*giggles* (by Stormy))
From: [identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com
It's a shame but no episode, sorry! It's a blooper... Don't tell me you never saw the "brace yourself" clip!

Date: 2005-03-25 06:51 am (UTC)
ext_20943: (honest (by Stormy))
From: [identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com
Pics used to be at http://www.realduesouth.com/ but the page isn't there anymore:(
... Maybe I can send you the clip, give me some time to work it out cuz I'm not at home and my friend got the clip anyway!

Date: 2005-03-24 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com
I'm late to comment (sorry!) but this is so cute! Welcome to flashfic! :)

bears Squeee so funny

Date: 2005-03-24 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quatre_k.livejournal.com

"the kindest thought he could spare for the hapless constable was a fervent prayer for him to somehow go back in time and be devoured by bears as a child"

Hee thats funny mauled by bears or eaten by bears just sounds so funny

Date: 2005-03-24 08:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] dubhartach.livejournal.com
Loved the twist. And Ray slidding onto Fraser.

Date: 2005-03-25 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buzzylittleb.livejournal.com
Greatness!

And congrats, I've been lurking a lot longer and have never managed to post myself, so go you!

Date: 2005-03-28 04:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] chibimonnie.livejournal.com
Very cute!

Date: 2005-04-02 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com
Absolutely charming. Thank you so much for sharing your talent :)

Date: 2010-06-17 09:50 pm (UTC)
ext_41296: throat!porn pic curtesy lilferret (due south laugh)
From: [identity profile] wanderingsmith.livejournal.com
aww!! :D just what the doctor ordered for the stressed out patient, thank you!

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