First Line Challenge by Tara Keezer (2)

[elementalv.livejournal.com]

Title: Saying Goodbye
Author: Tara Keezer
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I never write femslash, except for when I do. 100 words set shortly before Victoria’s Secret.
First Line: From lucifercircle’s Cravings; posted later than the first one I did, because that first line wouldn't leave me alone.

They lie together, dark hair mingling, pale skin next to pale skin. Meg thinks she’s never met anyone as intriguing or lovely as Victoria, and she just can’t stop looking.

Victoria smiles sleepily and asks, “What are you thinking?”

“How much you’ve come to mean to me,” Meg answers. “I wish you would reconsider.”

“I can’t.” Victoria’s voice is flat, and Meg sighs, knowing she’s lost this battle.

“I’ll miss you,” Meg says softly, trailing her hand down Victoria’s shoulder.

“I have to go.”

“Chicago is so far away,” Meg whispers.

“Not that far.” Victoria teases Meg’s nipple. “Come visit.”

Comments

[lucifercircle.livejournal.com]

Oooooh. Somehow this manages to be quite chilling. This is very interesting - it puts a whole new spin on quite a lot of things.

[elementalv.livejournal.com]

It would certainly explain why Thatcher hit the pissy lane when she landed in Chicago.

[llassah.livejournal.com]

*hearts* that is so creepy! And makes a frightening amount of sense *g*

[elementalv.livejournal.com]

I hadn't really thought of it as creepy until you mentioned it, but yes, I think you're right.

[malnpudl.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. That gave me the shivers.

What a lot of story in such a few words.

[elementalv.livejournal.com]

The idea of Meg not knowing hits a few buttons for me, and this scene works for me on a lot of different levels.