Broken challenge by slidellra

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Of the "somebody had to do it" variety. <100 words in which, um, seven or eight things are broken. F/K, PG. omphale23 looked at an earlier version of this for me.




A kiss, utterly unexpected, overwhelmingly soft and rough and real and now and...

"Shit, oh shit. Sorry--I didn't mean--I won't. I swear, Fraser."

Fraser's previous record from desk to office door was 2.3 seconds, and that time a child's life had been at stake.

The sound Ray made when Fraser caught him, and, happier, those he made later.

Fraser's left bootlace wouldn't give, wouldn't.

The vase blocked the window, and the window was Dief's exit.

The cot was on its last legs anyway. The desk chair was something of a surprise.


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Comments

[brigantine.livejournal.com]

Fraser's previous record from desk to office door was 2.3 seconds,

I can so see him lunging over the top of the desk and tackling Ray before he can get the door open.

And Dief fleeing the scene. *snort*

Wry and funny, and oddly - but definitely - romantic. Fabulous! ;D

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Greased lightening, he is. Fraser Goes After His Man, in supersonic speed.

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Hee. Hit the post button prematurely. I hate it when that happens.

Also, YAY and thank you. *curtseys*