Broken challenge by slidellra

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Of the "somebody had to do it" variety. <100 words in which, um, seven or eight things are broken. F/K, PG. omphale23 looked at an earlier version of this for me.




A kiss, utterly unexpected, overwhelmingly soft and rough and real and now and...

"Shit, oh shit. Sorry--I didn't mean--I won't. I swear, Fraser."

Fraser's previous record from desk to office door was 2.3 seconds, and that time a child's life had been at stake.

The sound Ray made when Fraser caught him, and, happier, those he made later.

Fraser's left bootlace wouldn't give, wouldn't.

The vase blocked the window, and the window was Dief's exit.

The cot was on its last legs anyway. The desk chair was something of a surprise.


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Comments

[nos4a2no9.livejournal.com]

Veeeeery clever. I had to re-read a couple of times because I didn't get it (and that's because I is dumb, not because normal folks couldn't figure it out). And oh, the image of the broken cot *and* the chair. These boys do such crazy things when they're in love.

Great job, hon!

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Hee! It's diabolical and sneaky, it is.

They really, really do. Crazy and physical and forceful things. Inappropriate for the workplace hot things. Yeah...What was I saying?