Bad Sex Challenge by mizface
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ds_flashfictionTitle: Hold on to What You’ve Got
Author: mizface
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: PG
Word count: 414
Summary/Warning: Be careful who you let have a key to your place
“Ray. Ray. RAY.”
“What?”
“Are you ever going to put this behind you?”
“I’m thinking no.”
“Don’t be ridiculous. Are you saying you’re going to hold onto this, this minor embarrassment forever?”
“Minor?! My mother walked in on us having sex. How is that minor?”
“To be accurate, we weren’t actually having sex, Ray.”
“Fine. You want to be specific, I can be specific. She walked in on us having foreplay. Naked foreplay. Is that better? And why aren’t you embarrassed by all this?”
“Well of course it’s not something I wished your mother to see. But it isn’t as if she was unaware of our relationship. Surely she realized such activities take place.”
“Knowing and seeing are two totally different things, Fraser. Yeah, I figure she knows we have sex, but that doesn’t mean I wanted her to be an eyewitness.”
“I would certainly hope not.”
“So it really doesn’t bother you.”
“I wouldn’t go that far. I’m just having trouble understanding why you can’t get past it. It isn’t as if this just happened. And your mother has been quite mature about the whole thing.”
“What are you saying – I’m being immature about this?”
“…I’m just saying I’d like you to let it go. After all, it has been several days. You’ve talked with your mother since then – did she treat you any differently?”
“Nah, but then she wouldn’t. Not her style. Heh – I’m betting she calls before she comes over again, though.”
“That’s probably wise in any case.”
“I still can’t believe this isn’t bugging you more.”
“I suppose, were it my parent that had walked in, I might feel differently.”
“Yeah, I can see that. So when we go to the folks’ for dinner next week you’ll be cool about this.”
“Oh dear. Well, it might be a bit awkward. But I’m sure I’ll manage, as long as you behave.”
“Trust me. This I will not be bringing up in front of my parents. Ever. Hey, c’mere.”
“Mmmm. I see you’ve decided to follow my advice.”
“Ahhh…mmyeah, well, don’t let it be said I – god, do that again – that I’m too stubborn to see when I’m wrong.”
“No, I’d never – yes, please – say that.”
“Especially not when – yeah, right there – I’m presented with the facts.”
“I’m – aahhh – glad you’ve decided – oh my GOD Ray – to let this go.”
“Yeah, well let’s just say I found something better to hold onto.”
Author: mizface
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: PG
Word count: 414
Summary/Warning: Be careful who you let have a key to your place
“Ray. Ray. RAY.”
“What?”
“Are you ever going to put this behind you?”
“I’m thinking no.”
“Don’t be ridiculous. Are you saying you’re going to hold onto this, this minor embarrassment forever?”
“Minor?! My mother walked in on us having sex. How is that minor?”
“To be accurate, we weren’t actually having sex, Ray.”
“Fine. You want to be specific, I can be specific. She walked in on us having foreplay. Naked foreplay. Is that better? And why aren’t you embarrassed by all this?”
“Well of course it’s not something I wished your mother to see. But it isn’t as if she was unaware of our relationship. Surely she realized such activities take place.”
“Knowing and seeing are two totally different things, Fraser. Yeah, I figure she knows we have sex, but that doesn’t mean I wanted her to be an eyewitness.”
“I would certainly hope not.”
“So it really doesn’t bother you.”
“I wouldn’t go that far. I’m just having trouble understanding why you can’t get past it. It isn’t as if this just happened. And your mother has been quite mature about the whole thing.”
“What are you saying – I’m being immature about this?”
“…I’m just saying I’d like you to let it go. After all, it has been several days. You’ve talked with your mother since then – did she treat you any differently?”
“Nah, but then she wouldn’t. Not her style. Heh – I’m betting she calls before she comes over again, though.”
“That’s probably wise in any case.”
“I still can’t believe this isn’t bugging you more.”
“I suppose, were it my parent that had walked in, I might feel differently.”
“Yeah, I can see that. So when we go to the folks’ for dinner next week you’ll be cool about this.”
“Oh dear. Well, it might be a bit awkward. But I’m sure I’ll manage, as long as you behave.”
“Trust me. This I will not be bringing up in front of my parents. Ever. Hey, c’mere.”
“Mmmm. I see you’ve decided to follow my advice.”
“Ahhh…mmyeah, well, don’t let it be said I – god, do that again – that I’m too stubborn to see when I’m wrong.”
“No, I’d never – yes, please – say that.”
“Especially not when – yeah, right there – I’m presented with the facts.”
“I’m – aahhh – glad you’ve decided – oh my GOD Ray – to let this go.”
“Yeah, well let’s just say I found something better to hold onto.”
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Date: 2008-12-11 04:02 am (UTC)Totally understandable that Ray freaks out:)
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Date: 2008-12-11 05:11 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2008-12-11 04:23 am (UTC)Ha! Awesome! That's some lovely back and forth you've got going, there. ♥
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Date: 2008-12-11 05:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-11 08:16 am (UTC)And now I'm curious about everyone's reactions to Bob doing a little badly-timed haunting.
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Date: 2008-12-11 05:16 pm (UTC)And yeah, my mind tried to go to the Bob-place, but I wouldn't let it. If this hadn't been all-dialogue Ben would've at least thought about it.
Someone else up for the ghostus-interruptus challenge?
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Date: 2008-12-11 12:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-11 05:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-11 12:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-11 05:22 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2008-12-17 12:08 am (UTC)“Are you ever going to put this behind you?”
“I’m thinking no.”
heheheh....poor Ray! I seriously doubt he ever really will. Now Dief walking through the other room will seriously freak him out...
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Date: 2008-12-17 02:09 am (UTC)Ray and Fraser, 2028:
Hey, Fraser, remember the time...
*eyeroll* Not that again, Ray. Honestly, can't you find something *else* to fuss about?
I'm thinking Dief would bother Fraser more, making all sorts of snide wolfy comments. But still, Dief is better than Bob.