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With many beta thanks to

aerye for being tough and

mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

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That's marvellous. It was obvious from the start how it would end, but so satisfying to get there! I just love "Fraser's heart swelled" and "too moved for words" and Ray's "You—you have to say no to this, if it's not your thing, okay? No big deal. I won't—". You've got just the right amount of description so that I can picture it well, but it doesn't slow things down at all. I love your descriptions of Ray: hands lean and quick, eyes bright with laughter, a complicated scowl.

F/K from you is a real treat!

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Eeee, yay! Thank you so much! *beam*

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